Looks interesting. Don't quit your day job.
I kid! I couldn't do better, no how no way.
Overall I like it.
It begs for a Harley/Limited bumper cover.
I would make the seat sides and back match the outer parts of the seating surface. Too many colours and it draws my eye away from the cushy looking seating surface.
I'd also shrink the Titanium text on the dash about 20% and darken it a bit to make it subtle.
I do like the real brushed aluminium trim of the Platinum and would happily add it to my truck. In this case it should be TITANIUM, like my door inserts and center stack. Okay, maybe not like mine. Mine is plastanium.